Wednesday, August 18, 2010

What are first person and third person?

the first person is talking about you .
You only use Us, I and We.
And you only use it when you're talking
about yourself and you including other people.
For example: We went to Burger King.
or I went to Mc Donalds.

The third person is when you're talking
about some else not includeing yourself .
You only use them, her, him, she and he.
And you only use it when you're talking
about someone else and you're not included
to it.
For example: She went to Burger King or He
went to Mc Donalds.

Friday, August 6, 2010

Tuesday

we did not do much its just the same as always
booring with nothing to do but just walk around
the school again and again but then me and shavile
found a ball a tennis ball and decided to play catch
and we did then paul came along and we asked him
if wewant to play but we just notice that he cant
catch the ball so we taught him how to catch but he
still havent manage to catch the ball

Monday

on monday was the booooringest day ever me,
shavile and paul didnt do much its so booring
that i have not much to write about it and at
home i watch south park the episode was about
a guy teaching a kid how to play wrestling but stan
and the others think that the teacher was gay or something
so yahh thats all what i did on monday
two days ago in lunch time i was with Jaezm,
Dylan, Alex, Ed, and the korean students
we were playing soccer the people in my teams
was Alex, Ed and jason was in my team the
other korean students was in jaezm team
i scored probably four goals
and Alex scored one goal but the other
Jaezm socred one and the korean students
scored porbably 5 and in the end we lose 5 to 6
yestarday we have mrs leach and she had
given us long piece of fax paper and asked us
to write 0 and 1 in the end and then she asked us
to fold it into half, quaters, thirds, quaeters, sixth
and then eight and it looked nice and a practical
number for fraction and she brought up some
accending order of question

Thursday, June 24, 2010

I won a planet

The prize I would want is to own my own planet and name it Mark. And I want to look like earth but with a huge rail gun so if a big UFO or anything else is has coming near my planet that thing will eliminate the threats.

In my planet the population has to stay low so that people won’t produce too much rubbish. I want it to stay environment friendly.

The awesome thing about my planet is that you don’t need to work everything is free. And you don’t have to travel using car you used planes.

Everything is rune by solar energy not gas and coal.

This planet temperature is on normal it doesn’t rain cats and dogs, tsunami, and volcano eruption. There’s no bad weather

I think that I should have my own planet because I know how to look after the people and stuff around me and know that I can look after what is given to me.

My Self Assesment

My goal in reading was to learn to read at a higher level, be able to read without making mistakes and not having to re-read paragraphs. I have achieved this goal by practicing my reading at home and at school during silent reading time.


My goal in writing was to structure my paragraphs better and improve my spelling. I have been working toward this goal by learning to plan my writing and edit it carefully with the help of the teacher. I have been practicing spelling the words I find difficult each week.


My goal in numeracy was to improve my basic facts and to achieve 100% in the basic facts tests. I am working toward this goal by practicing my basic facts each day.